Re: Tenchi Fanfic


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from "Charles C. Liu" <charlesl@thirdwave.net>
subject Re: Tenchi Fanfic
date Wed, 04 Oct 1995 14:58:21 -0700
At 01:20 PM 10/4/95 PDT, you wrote:
>Okay, I came up with a coo' idea for my Fanfic. If this has been done 
>before, MINE'S BETTER!
>
>Here goes.
>
>This is just a preliminary; I started writing this in English class 
>today.
>
>    "Faster, faster! She's gaining!"
>    "Hey, look. This is sorta outa my league. I'm used to dodging 
>bullets, not lightning bolts."
>    "Well, you're the best driver in Chicago, and..."
>    "Damn right I am, and I'll get you there safe and sound, so long 
>as you pay up."
>
>    The cherry red hotrod charged thru the streets of Chicago, and 
>smart citizens, leapt off the street, and dragged less fortunate ones 
>off with them. They knew the Roadbuster well. What they weren't 
>expecting was a woman dressed in red and black flying thru the air, 
>orange bolts flying from her hands, aimed at the car.
>    
>    "How dare you leave me in Japan, Tenchi! Coming to America with 
>Aeka, and leaving me to be shut in that damn cave by that crazy old 
>man!"
>
>    Tenchi cowered in the back seat of the car, holding his head and 
>wimpering.
>    Bean looked back with a huge grin on his face.
>    "That's some girl you've got there, bud!" he laughed as Tenchi 
>looked up sorrowfully at him.
>    "She's no girl, she's a 2000 year old Demon space pirate!"
>    "No shat?! Hmm, I might have to charge extra for this... But 
>let's leave it at that, hmm? I probably don't wanna hear any more."
>
>    But Tenchi hadn't heard him.
>    "...from a cave, then attacks me at shcool, then my house was 
>shrunk and ships crashed at Grampa's shrine, and then space pirate 
>attacks, and space police, princesses, demons, scientists..."
>    
>    "Ha ha ha ha! I don't wanna know! I form my business 
>relationships on complete discretion. The less I know, usually the 
>better." Bean laughed, drops of sweat dripping from his face...
>

That's a pretty good idea, but Aeka!? I have nothing against Aeka but she's
a little too stiff and formal for me. Why don't you bring Sasami along to
for a little extra fun.(one of the most devious little girl that I know, but
then if your 700 years old then I expect you would know a few tricks.) Or
you could bring the entire gang along.

Charles C. Liu
charlesl@manhattan.thirdwave.net


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