On Thu, 29 Jun 1995, John Walter Biles wrote:

> I thought it was a good idea...but some of it seemed to be  
> missing...you had a summary of the opening of the story...but it was  
> missing a middle and an end so far...at least in the form it reached  
> me...

She said that it was a summary of the first part only...

> 
> Also, at least in my past experience...it usually takes a couple of  
> days for everyone on this list to actually get caught up with it  
> after a note is first posted...
> 
> For that matter, I have my own mailing list for proofing my fiction  
> and often it takes days for people to get back to me on it...and I  
> only post stuff to it once every few weeks...or months  
> sometimes...and there are still delays...

No wonder. When you post a story, its usually 300k. :P

> 
> Add in that half or more of the people on this list are lurkers,...
> 
> I wouldn't get too discouraged.  I think you have a good idea...
> 
> I assume the main conflict of the story is going to be between  
> Ukyou's efforts to build a new life as Ranma's fiancee and as a girl  
> and her duty to fulfill the duties of a son as mentioned in the note?
> 
> And the ways in which everyone reacts to this?
> 
> John Biles
>