>Anyway, here it is, extensively reformatted and even updated a bit.

Overall, much better than its predeccessors. But a few mistakes still
remain.

>3E . In V Ch Belldandy reasons that she will be able to break Mara's
seal 

Are you refering to V4 Ch27 or 28 here?

>3I.  WHERE DO ALL THOSE OUTFITS COME FROM?

Cute addition.

>Even Skuld does this, apparently.

I doubt it. She might have her wardrobe tucked away in a pocket
dimension next to her bombs though.

>in Ch166 R/Lind's instructor has what appear to be the same markings as
Mara.

You can drop the 'R/Lind' form now. The manga has decided on Rind as her
spelling.

>but Belldandy isn't normally referred to as "Goddess of the Past".

Do you perhaps mean 'Present' instead?

>It seems that humans can normally see angels,

I just realised that we know for a fact that angels can be seen by
humans, if the goddess want them to see it anyway. V13 Ch75. It's not
Holybell's fault that Sayoko didn't believe she was real.

>>4D. So far, there are only two known cases in
which a goddess has 2 angels. In one case the angels are twins
(Ch167), while in the other case the second angel is a purified
"servant demon" implanted against the will of the goddess. <<

Considering what you've already written so far, you can afford to be
clearer on this! Just say it, Rind's angels are twins, Belldandy has a
servant demon implanted against her will.

>A goddess can bring someone with her through a teleport, as Mara does
in V16 Ch62

You got the volume wrong, and I can't figure out which chapter you're
referring to.

Great job! Just a few more touchups and it will be ready.